Rough cut feedback

Brad Stearn long road media student
 i liked the shot where he stands up and begins to move because it look cinematic and smooth. I liked the lighting during the performance especially when the star moved in front of the light it gave him a good back light. There performance looked upbeat and convincing especially as the guitarist doesn't actually play guitar in real life. I liked the movement throughout the video. The narrative of him waling around the house i liked the overall shot type it look cinematic. The ending last minute with the long shot lasted to long and needs more cuts which could be cutaways of the fretboard or close-ups of the guitar or try and add more narrative. i liked the tripod microphone (was a good idea at the time...).